I know that the writing lags in places; this is to emphasize the monotony of their existence, but I understand that also becomes annoying to read. In such cases, feel free to skip over them, the important bits are always summed up in cutscenes before significant events. Being a work in progress, the style will fluctuate, so if it is hard to read in places, rest assured that it will improve, or at least change as you progress.
Happy reading, and Praise the Sun!
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